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(Contains: violence/gore and ideologically sensitive material)
Daddy?
Why are you hurting mommy?
Why's mommy crying?
Daddy?
What are you doing daddy?
Mommy said to stop.
Daddy?
Mommies on the floor
Why are you getting
on her daddy?
Daddy why's your hands
around her neck?
Why does mommy look
scared?
Daddy? She can't breathe daddy
What's she doing daddy?
Why isn't she moving?
Daddy?
Why are you looking at me
Like that?
Why isn't mommy moving?
Daddy?
Why did you push me daddy?
Why are you on top of me?
Daddy?
I can't breathe daddy
Your hands are in the way
Daddy?
Please move
Daddy I feel weak
Daddy
I can't see anymore
I feel cold. I'm scared
The monster might get me
Daddy?
Please help me
I love you daddy
Daddy!
I see mommy
shes crying daddy
Why does she hurt?
Did she hit herself?
Mommy said
The only monster
I need to be afraid of
Is you.
This is a poem i had in my mind for a while.. I don't really think it turned out that good but oh well. Well it's about Relationship and child abuse told from a childs eyes. I really tried to emphasize the childs curiousity (as you can see) XD anyway. Comment/Rate/Enjoy!
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xXxPunkPixiexXx Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad :'D
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Writer
I know! :glomp:
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Warriorfanatic99 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
So sad but this happens so much in real life!
Also, you put "breath" instead of "breathe" in some parts.
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Writer
Oh sorry i'll fix that right away!
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Warriorfanatic99 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Okay! Just trying to be helpful! No need to be sorry! Everyone can make typos!
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Writer
Oh it's okay :)
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Warriorfanatic99 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
:iconsmilieplz:
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PhoenixFirewing Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's a really sad poem. It's sad things like that happen in real life :(
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Writer
I agree :'( Thanks for the fav btw..
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PhoenixFirewing Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no prob
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