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When I watch a busy street
I dream of each car
Colliding with my body
Is that wrong?
When I Shower
I dream of the warm water
entering my mouth
Engulfing my lungs
Is that wrong?
When I take my medication
I dream of downing them all
Sending me into an everlasting sleep
Is that wrong?
When i'm walking across a bridge
I dream of jumping off the side
Although I can't swim
Is that wrong?
When I am cutting up vegtables
I dream of slicing my throat
From left to right
Is that wrong?
Suicide
I obsess over it
I'm infactuated by it
It detirmanes my every move
My every word
My every breath
And yet
I'm completely fine with that
Is that wrong?
So yeah this is just a short little poem i came up with last night after having a EXTREMELY horrible night ^^; SO yeah Comment and favorite i guess
Comment if you want to lighten my mood (You can try)
So yea... More from last night comming soon i guess.
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pop789 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
yes to When I am cutting up vegtables but only because you've thought about which way you would slice. good poem though.
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XxLunarXRainxX Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Beautiful, thick as blood and deep as a wound. [._.] It seems to encase alot of many peoples emotions over time.... I enjoy this, but not the mood you had to be in to write it. I hope everything is okay and stays that way. :]
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Writer
Things have been better...
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XxLunarXRainxX Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
I can understand that, it's unfortunate. I really do hope they get better though. . .
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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Armonsterz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
don't die please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Student Writer
O? why not? :p
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Armonsterz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
your my friend i can't let you do that:iconsadplz:
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musicalangel659 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Student Writer
Awe <3 well just for you i wont
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Armonsterz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
thank u^^
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